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What do you think of my poem? (I'm 14)?
Look for me in the sky, my love
On a night such as this
When the stars glaze the heavens
And the air is cool to the skin
There I sit watching over the world
With a soft, silvery glow
A beacon of light for the lost and the thoughtful
And a path for the wandering
I am a guardian of the light
For I am born from the sun
And without it I am nothing
An undiscovered truth shrouded in darkness
You are my sun
And your smile my light
You are my warmth
You guide me through the night
THANK YOU EVERYBODY!!!
Not bad for 14. Good for you. But one mistake stands out, you are talking about the sun which is not around "through the night." You were not rhyming prior to that stanza, so don't start now. Change the final line and it's a decent poem. Everyone writes about love and you may be talented enough to try something different. I wrote the funniest poem about liver when I was 12. My parents forced me to eat it and I hated it. The best writing comes from that which you have experienced. Good luck.
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